Destiny and eternity are
chiseled in seconds.
Flecks of snow become
mountains.
Drops of rain make
oceans.
Thoughts tumble into
decisions, and actions,
overtime, leave a
legacy.
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Author:
Thomas W Case (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 27th, 2023 10:24
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- Category: Reflection
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Comments14
Karmic legacy .
Thank you.
Yep, I will remember ya! heehee.
Thank you so much.
Thanks for the message my friend. I'm exploring ways to publish my collection of poems, any help would be greatly appreciated.
The words and the pic shows that you are “leaving your legacy”
Thank you, I hope it's a good one.
Nicely penned!
Opening and closing lines are full of wisdom. They in turn answer your original question. The answer of course is Yes. - Phil A.
Thanks Phil.
That is the answer, I hope it's a good one.
He loves those that love him to a thousand generations.
And I do love Him. I needed to hear that tonight. Thank you.
Simply equisite, your first two lines beauty and genius to say the least. ❤️
Thank you so much for the kind comment.
We are but collective grains of sand, aren't we? And the result of our thoughts... Well articulated sir. 👌🏼
Thank you for the comment.
Oh how will it be written, I don't know. But I know this is well written.
Thank you man.
I enjoyed this very much Thomas. Thank you for sharing and nicely done!
Thank you.
I just love this and always remember that you leave a mark on a lot of people and I will remember you.
Hang in there. Thank you for reading.
This is a beautiful reminder that everything that happens in this universe adds up to something spectacular. And, then, that beautiful child....legacy indeed.
Thank you so much.
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