What’s That Smell

Positive Girl

I think it’s death

How did I get here

I just came out to sweep the deck

Got locked out

They could not see me

Went back to see 

but fell instead 

For some reason 

No one asked

where is that old lady

Could she be missing 

The hours pass

Soon they will ask

What's that smell

That smells like death

It’s me

 

 

  • Author: D.J.Colditz (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 1st, 2023 19:05
  • Comment from author about the poem: Something about being old. Sometimes no one knows you’re there and won’t even ask if you’re not. True Story lol
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 4
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  • Thomas W Case

    Wow, truly genius way of saying, "Maybe we should check on Grandma." very funny and serious. Brilliant.

  • Positive Girl

    Thanks so much for the positive feedback. Much appreciated.

  • Lil

    I JUST LOVE THIS SOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



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