A single ticket to Mars

Lorenz

I would like to be reborn 

as a may poet  in a mars suburb,

turning pissy gray into red tornadoes

 My couch potatoes city flatters 

in a polite Flemish manner ...

A girl in black  frozen in the scream

of her boredom, fancies herself as Madonna....

The girl in black is only available

to tricks mongers and monkeys around...

One day I'll wake up handsome hangman,

it'll make the vile rascals laugh ...

And the dogs will leave mails 

at the foot of my tree...

It rains tears of crows in their sunday best ,

the streets are dripping their faulty loves

that smell of french blue cheese ..

In the metro there's a guy with a haddith faith

who sends everyone  to  hell ...

   ''One single to Phobos mister bullets collector" 

  • Author: lorenz (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 5th, 2023 11:01
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments3

  • Thomas W Case

    Powerful imagery. Great use of senses.

    • Lorenz

      thanks thomas .My sagittarius aspirations ...

    • Ellen Marsell

      Un récit visuellement riche. Un travail remarquable !

      • Lorenz

        merci de votre appréciation !

      • Ma5on

        From my castle of sand I watched the crows tears drown the world.

        Imagery as thick and heavy as dark velvet!

        I was immersed in this heavy cloak of misery from beginning to end.

        Great piece!

        M

        • Lorenz

          Thank you for your precious appreciation !



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