My ears bleed to the amplifying sound of silence
I accept the coldness in my heart as a given
Into my chest a spike is forcibly driven
Hands shake as my spoken words tremble
Lost in the ether is any meaning or sense
This feeling of loss is too intense
and so the rain slowly drowns my tears
As I wander aimlessly in this desolate place
Nowhere to find shelter for my head
and so I’m left to sink instead
and so the rain slowly drowns my tears
As I wander aimlessly in this desperate space
Nowhere to find solace for my soul
So I’m left to sink in this hole
My brain pounds to the raw relentless sound of silence
I accept the coolness in my heart as a given
The pain I endure is so well hidden
Muscles ache as my throat audibly screams
Lost in the ether is any sense or meaning
This feeling of loss leaves me bleeding
and so the rain drowns my tears
But can’t disguise my enduring fears
and so I drown…aimlessly
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Ma5on (
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Totally feel this one. My Scorpio brain is being flooded right now and feeling something so similar. Is it a nightmare, a vit d deficiency, a true feeling of loneliness? The answer's somewhere in the ether. Somewhere the answer exists, so my persistence presses onward through the ether. Press onward, stud!
Having just read your latest and commenting about searching for an answer without really knowing the question; that theme fits here too!
So we just need to work together on the question in hope the answer finds us eventually otherwise we will have to drift in the ether for eternity!
Thanks for the comment.
M
Poetic seeking at its finest. Love aligning moments. Stay on with the search and let me know if you crack the code (insert dude wearing sunnies emoji).
A phrasing I feel intensely :
"Nowhere to find solace for my soul "
Thanks DF for sharing a line that you feel.
M
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