Promises

arqios

 

 

 

 

~ exPRESSions ~

  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 15th, 2023 03:13
  • Comment from author about the poem: Nothing is ever all that they first appear to be…. or are they…. for sure most things are part way true and real and pure.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 10
  • Users favorite of this poem: John Lee
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  • orchidee

    I don't like places with paved front 'gardens', which are no garden at all!

    • arqios

      Try the green artificial lawn, that’ll surely blow your fuse.

    • 2781

      Now, that is brilliant!

      • arqios

        Thanks 🙏🏻 far too many don’t seem to get it. Lol 😂

      • Neville



        the only constant .. is time but my artificial intelligence keeps telling me its wrong ..

        • arqios

          Slow or fast time telling would knock AI into a delirium!

        • Firefall

          True words. Have you found that your memories are not quite what is captured digitally? I think the differences increase as you get older. I really enjoyed the sentiment of your poem.

          • arqios

            Yes, indeed! A curious turn of events and probably part of an irreversible process. 🫠🫥🙂

          • Doggerel Dave

            From data storage to artificial lawns via AI, I got it alright - sums up my discombobulation nicely.

            • arqios

              It’s a “brave new world,” after all 🙃

            • John Lee

              Moments are rarely lived anymore. Only captured then released.

              • arqios

                So true. The capture-release mechanism is a crispy and shallow memory and can be void of emotional depth and durability.



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