The Sun and the Moon, in love
The Sun and the Moon, flying above
The Sun and the Moon, in fights
The Sun and the Moon, sad, day and night.
The Sun happy and energetic
The Moon is a reck
The Sun trying to make things better
The Moon still crying, eyes getting wetter.
The Moon, sensitive
The Moon doesn’t wanna live
Wants to help make it right
Ends up losing his inner demon fights.
The Sun is sad
The Sun isn’t glad, anymore
Thinking that they were happy before.
The Moon lives
Goes back to the way things were
The Sun is happy but still down
The Moon tries to flip that frown,
All the love they missed
That one kiss that made their love into an eclipse.
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Author:
Jake Puni (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 17th, 2023 17:11
- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is about me and my ex's current state in our relationship when we were still together and it still hits close to home til this day
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Comments1
Excellent work.
Thank you
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