The invisible wind was her propellant
Her body flew through the sky effortlessly; full of lightness
Wings fluffy and free, she cascaded through the soft, white clouds
And over the tall, rigid mountains
How valiant she looked, her form strong, confident and peaceful
She careened up and up, farther into the beautiful yet daunting unknown
Force and fervor were her drive;
Determination
-Devorah F Pleva
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Author:
Devorah (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 21st, 2023 17:24
- Category: Reflection
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Great imagery.
Thank you so much! I was definitely hoping my use of imagery was good!
I love your way of flying !
Something very mercurial ...
Wow, what a big word you used; mercurial! I'm actually not sure I know what that means lol, but I'm presuming it's something positive?
it's a word linked to mercury ( gemini's planet ) very positive for sure !
I am a gemini !
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a write to be applauded DevilLove;
Aww, why thank you so much! I appreciate your kind words!
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