Why does progress have to feel like failure?
Why does change have to feel like loss?
Why does pain have to feel so permanent?
Why does success have to feel so far away?
Why does self improvement have to feel like the end of myself?
Why does self-sabotage have to feel so comfortable?
Why does self-care have to feel like a chore?
Why does giving up seem like the only attainable solution?
Why does Hope and Faith feel so unreachable?
Why does progress have to feel like failure?
-Devorah F. Pleva
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Author:
Devorah (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 28th, 2023 08:06
- Category: Reflection
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Comments2
I love the repetition of the first and last line it makes the poem feel very round and whole.
Thanks! 🙂
Nice repetition of the first and last line. A nice piece.
Thanks for your kind words!
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