I am the ghost of a dream long dead,
chained in the dungeon of your heart
A fettered fantasy locked in your head
retained as a mummified storybook part
You dream of a savior with a slaves behavior
You say from any old soul could fulfill this goal
But with their failure they fall out of favor
Only a shiny knight's role can you cajole
You gave up fairy-tales as a child
Straw can not be spun into gold
You pull nature's flowers, as weeds reviled
Why must even God be controlled?
So until it can be said that the last ghost has fled,
I'll sound the knell of this phantom bell
Crying “Bury your dead, from them beautiful flowers are fed
So release me from the spell so fell of your wishing-well”
- Author: sorenbarrett ( Offline)
- Published: December 2nd, 2023 08:47
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments2
Good write SB.
Thanks Orchi for the read
Happened upon (though thankfully not involved with) a few for whom the desire for 'a savior with a slaves behavior' was present. The need to exert power and control for its own sake as a desirable way of interacting with others brings forth some almost-homicidal tendencies in me.
Message wrapped up in plenty of poetic metaphor which took, for me, some unravelling but worth the effort, Soren.
Thanks Dave you are right. Appreciate the review.
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