Simple, cozy autumn day
When you came to this world.
A crucial milestone on my way,
You've been sent by the Lord.
To teach the language and much more,
To show me who I am.
I didn't realise before
My life was kinda sham.
You are my best and closest friend,
I pray God gives you piece,.His love , protection, strength to bend,
If trials are increased.
Your pure heart, your artist's soul
Are beautiful and calm
I'm trying hard so not to fall
I'll meet you in the sweetest dwam...
And now please go and jol).
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Author:
Gregoria (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 10th, 2023 05:15
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Comments1
Fantastic
Much appreciated, as a feedback from a native speaker to a non-native one , who's only learning to express thoughts in the second language 💙💛.
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