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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: …elsewhere featured as poetics of breathing
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Good write A.
A cue for my corny joke: I tried not breathing for 24 hours, to save air for one day. I did it, but didn't feel well afterwards. Doh! lol.
When we don’t exhale the plants suffocate 🍃😳
Yes, thanks A. But I was trying to save air for a day. Should we all try it? Is there a lot of air about? Only hot air from me, they say! boohoo. lol.
Downtown it may be hard to tell with all the smog!
When we don’t exhale the plants suffocate 🍃😳
I will try only breathing out for 24 hours, not breathing in at all. Eh?!
Elsewhere? You cheatin' on MPS? O. O
lol, don't mind me
Exclusives are also available! 👍🏻
His word will not return void.
His Word is also the best poetry ever!
Brilliant work.
Thanks Tom!
It is often from emptiness that a poem emerges. That void as the pause in breathing is the beginning of the next breath or creation. Or maybe I'm just blowing a lot of hot air. Beautiful none the less it has a feeling of peace to it just like a calm breath.
And a continuing series of calm breathing makes for content existence:-)
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