Good write A.
A cue for my corny joke: I tried not breathing for 24 hours, to save air for one day. I did it, but didn't feel well afterwards. Doh! lol.
It is often from emptiness that a poem emerges. That void as the pause in breathing is the beginning of the next breath or creation. Or maybe I'm just blowing a lot of hot air. Beautiful none the less it has a feeling of peace to it just like a calm breath.
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Good write A.
A cue for my corny joke: I tried not breathing for 24 hours, to save air for one day. I did it, but didn't feel well afterwards. Doh! lol.
When we don’t exhale the plants suffocate 🍃😳
Yes, thanks A. But I was trying to save air for a day. Should we all try it? Is there a lot of air about? Only hot air from me, they say! boohoo. lol.
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Elsewhere? You cheatin' on MPS? O. O
lol, don't mind me
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His word will not return void.
His Word is also the best poetry ever!
Brilliant work.
Thanks Tom!
It is often from emptiness that a poem emerges. That void as the pause in breathing is the beginning of the next breath or creation. Or maybe I'm just blowing a lot of hot air. Beautiful none the less it has a feeling of peace to it just like a calm breath.
And a continuing series of calm breathing makes for content existence:-)
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