lonely pine tree
stands high and alone in glen
pines for company
stands high and alone in glen
pines for company
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Author:
Summersounds68 (
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Gives this reader wonderful imagery of a lone pine tree standing tall and proud. I liked the play on words pine /pines. Well done.
Cassie58, thank you for your upbeat words and appreciating the play on words within my haiku.
Sincerely, Sonia.
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