This image fills me with a dread ————— I fear this creature, for I have seen where it comes from. Only those unlucky enough to know that this is a creature born from a land with an internal-&-intrinsic nature most mad, senseless, and frustrable know that nothing is sacred in this creature's eyes, for this creature has eyes most-—— h–h–has ey-eyes- most-—— This creature is not just of a nature most nonsensical, but it was born from a punk-plane of being outside of a realm with walking, logic-melting statues who make comments so abominably-meta you feel aspects of your mind blow into gaskets of shrapnel so previously intrinsic to your thought that it is as if one-forth of your mind no longer exists; this creature is not a 'Trumpeter-of-an-end-of-times', but something far worse and much - it can't be expressed enough - much weirder. If you see this elephant-headed, meta-abomination you are somewhere with no name nor classification of any possible kind, and if you hear it even snort ——— dear lord, NEVER ponder why it did snort - for the truth will send your mind back before the time of sticks, fire, stone, and cave. This elephant may not know all and its residing dimensions are luckily impossible to find, but if you ever wonder into a 'white-void' that is clearly not a 'hyperspace', lacks even regard for the rules of all metaphysical-worlds where all direction is nonsense and the absurd looks contemporary in comparison -- fear this world. Fear ' The Elephant'.
- Author: HoboBilbo ( Offline)
- Published: December 30th, 2023 11:14
- Comment from author about the poem: As the name implies, it was inspired by horrible television. Please inform me of each and every mistake - tell me every fine-nitpick to every braud-crudism you have about this work.
- Category: Short story
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Every mistake you see, please berate. If something even annoys you, then explain why. I believe at least three of my influences are easy to spot.
I wrote a better story about a week before this one, but alas - it got lost. I posted the aforementioned story to an 'introduce yourself' and—because it wasn't directly about me—one of the editors deleted it. I know it was more subtle & even had a rather dandy quote I do believe I used cleverly - too bad. My original story about atrocities on the television screen is not only lost but was objectively better.
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