People's shit is really starting to stink
Many minds were never in sync
Not carrying a cumbersome sword and shield
My name isn't Link
Wear my Wu-Tang hoodie like it's chain mail
Questioning what it truly takes to prevail
Hope old age doesn't make me angry and frail
I concur that it's time to rethink
Dropping certain thoughts like a kitchen sink
My Lahey is no longer here
Pierce my side with a spear
Call me a circle
Seeing that many are square
Is my essence destined to remain here?
Can only lay each thought out bare
Courageous captain in my cranium
No need for Logan's claws
Soul soars indestructibility with vibranium
Not carrying a cumbersome sword and shield
My name isn't Link
Wear my Wu-Tang hoodie like it's chain mail
Questioning what it truly takes to prevail
Hope old age doesn't make me angry and frail
I concur that it's time to rethink
Dropping certain thoughts like a kitchen sink
My Lahey is no longer here
Pierce my side with a spear
Call me a circle
Seeing that many are square
Is my essence destined to remain here?
Can only lay each thought out bare
Courageous captain in my cranium
No need for Logan's claws
Soul soars indestructibility with vibranium
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Author:
Shaunmatthewcpoetry (
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Comments3
Excellent.
Thanks pal.
Oohh, he knows. He'll sort everything out! lol.
Haha!
🔥 Your poetic words cut through like a sharp blade, challenging the status quo with a unique rhythm. 🤯 The play on Link and Wu-Tang adds a layer of pop culture coolness, while the introspective lines pondering on aging and essence resonate deeply. 🧑🎤 The kitchen sink metaphor and the absence of Lahey evoke a sense of loss and reflection. 🤔 The contrast between circle and square beautifully illustrates your desire to stand out and question societal norms. 🔄 Your journey, like a courageous captain, sails through the cranium's vast seas, with vibes as unbreakable as vibranium. 🚀 Keep laying those thoughts bare! 👏
Dev
Thank you pal for your kind and great comment, it's comments like this that keep me writing, much appreciated!
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