Tinsel still a ‘twinkling,
upon our trodden floors,
there’s a certain knocking,
at our creaky doors,
wispy voice, does utter
“I’m weakened by thee”
lament from the gutter,
to make us feel guilty,
their faces are familiar,
as we truly look,
our own are so similar,
under all the muck,
after such inspections,
we can clearly tell,
they are us, dejections,
from our made hell,
crying from the future,
we can hear ourselves,
such sorrowful nurture,
that ignorance compels,
bomb like cheer, thunders,
from our proud disgust,
as life is written blunders,
our human choice, to rust,
but, these are just shades,
of what might be,
thus, authors of such fates,
may be history,
blood pressures may be high,
and moods may be low,
we still have to really try,
to make our happy grow,
in giving such a chance,
for our change to bloom,
together we can dance,
in a spacious room,
proud chevrons, rest at ease,
creased suits, you can retire,
for such a party, is no squeeze,
don’t even need a fire,
as in giving such a place,
where everyone is home,
is surely now the case,
that we should all atone,
thus, spirits on our doorsteps,
we do hear your call,
not to follow footsteps,
that will make such a fall.
- Author: AuburnScribbler ( Offline)
- Published: January 4th, 2024 13:09
- Comment from author about the poem: Here is the first one of the year for me, it was started two days ago, but I've just finished it today. This poem, also kicks off my new book of poetry for the year, entitled "Chin Up, Chest Out! 2024", of which, I hope, gives both of us a much needed confidence and self esteem boost. "Crying from the Future (in Giving)" is a lens into a horrible future that is penned by a clumsy present, but having the thought to alter such a sordid fate. I suppose what I'm trying to say with this poem is that, if we want to make it a Happy New Year, we have to make it such, and not repeat the same old routes, that comprise such a stale state of division and dissatisfaction. 2023 was riddled with too many horrendous mistakes, let 2024 be the year of much needed rectification! I hope that you enjoy; and take something from this poem, Happy 2024, and as always, please do stay safe everyone.
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 3
Comments1
Beautiful poetry. Happy New Year and many many wonderful wishes for your new book. 🤗
Thanks for the read Teddy.15, and for your lovely comment, it's very much appreciated.
A very Happy New Year to you too, thank you for the well wish for my new book, and I wish you well on your new collection for this year.
I hope that all is well.
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.