Beneath night's whispers, Dear Death's silent breath,
Shadows cast depth in a dance with cosmic depth.
No foe, but a guide in the universal quest,
Eternal rest found in Death's serene nest.
- Author: Dev parth (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: January 5th, 2024 10:51
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 16
Comments4
A very poetic write that I can feel. If I might offer one small suggestion it would be even better if you used a different word for depth in the line where it is used twice. Very nice
Sure I will try
Thank you for your feedback and suggestions
Well written!
Thank you 😊
a nice production inspired by the genius AI !
Thank you 😊 for your compliment 😊
O death, where is thy sting? Obgrave where is thy victory?
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