Okinawa The 1st Poem

Kinsley Lee

When the winter rain stops, the flowers in the garden are lovely coming out.
And on the leaves of the palm trees along the road, the freshness's seeping out.
The southern sea is calm, and as I gaze on it, tranquility fills the air, 
Yet silently conveying their pains, the injury still is lingering there.
(Jan.,7th 2024, Kinsley Lee) .

  • Author: Kinsley Lee (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 14th, 2024 10:59
  • Category: Short story
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  • Lorenz

    Zen garden echo !

    • Kinsley Lee

      Hi! Lorenz
      Thank you for your kind comments. Have nice days!

    • orchidee

      Good write K.

      • Kinsley Lee

        Hi! Orchidee
        Thank you for your kind comments. Have nice days!

      • jarcher54

        In my mind, Okinawa is a lovely semitropical paradise, and a place of insanity and death. Your last line perfectly brings in those dark shadows lingering over that green island. Thank you Kinsley!

        • Kinsley Lee

          Hi! Jarcher
          Thank you for your kind comments. I agree with you. It's beautiful island in West Pacific Ocean. We must alert to the totalitarians in the world. Have nice days!



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