quietly birds fly,
wind whispers,
floating leaves,
mountains silently point,
nature of peace,
wonder:
peace of nature,
pointing silent, mountains
leaves floating,
whispering wind,
flying birds (quietly)
quietly birds fly,
wind whispers,
floating leaves,
mountains silently point,
nature of peace,
wonder:
peace of nature,
pointing silent, mountains
leaves floating,
whispering wind,
flying birds (quietly)
Comments2
Fun to read, and the circling back (in literary terms this is "ring composition") has several effects. You inhale then exhale. You discover then remember. You go then return. Lovely.
Ah.. I love this! Great job Outcast!
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