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NinjaGirl


Notice of absence from NinjaGirl
Hi everyone! I have been gone for a while, I don’t know if any of you all have noticed, but I apologize for not leaving a notice anyway. I will be gone for a while. I am not done writing poetry, and I have not given up. But I will be away for some time. I expect to return around 2028. Not sure if any of you guys will see this, but thank you for reading my poetry. Please do not worry, I will be okay! I look forward to returning!

quietly birds fly,

wind whispers,

floating leaves,

mountains silently point,

nature of peace,

wonder:

peace of nature,

pointing silent, mountains

leaves floating,

whispering wind,

flying birds (quietly)

  • Author: NinjaGirl (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 14th, 2024 18:53
  • Comment from author about the poem: This poem is called a ketek! Read it backwards, and it is similar to the beginning, save word endings.
  • Category: Nature
  • Views: 7
  • Users favorite of this poem: jarcher54, John Lee
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  • jarcher54

    Fun to read, and the circling back (in literary terms this is "ring composition") has several effects. You inhale then exhale. You discover then remember. You go then return. Lovely.

  • John Lee

    Ah.. I love this! Great job Outcast!

    • NinjaGirl

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