when the night time falls stars twinkle in the sky
high up in the universe shining way up high
scattered all around lighting up the night
like diamonds in the sky beneath the moon so bright
mother natures picture filled so much charm
that twinkle in the night gentle and so calm
everything so quiet as gentle as can be
just to watch the stars warms the heart in me
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jim56 (
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Such peaceful and beautiful imagery in your lines. I have been a stargazer for as long as I can remember. Lovely work.
thankyou hoped you like my song xxx
Moonlit Tennessee is a delightfully romantic song. Yes I enjoyed, thank you:)
i have written over 100 songs and over 7 thousand poems
thanks again for your lovely comments xx
Do you play guitar aswell ? Nice writing
a little do you
No ….
I just write ..when I feel like it
writing is good for the soul
keep writing
Oh right .. it’s good to be happy too but I havnt had much of that today ..
No .. I’m not one of these people who are all ‘ successful ‘ and Achieve loads . I just write … sometimes . When I feel like that but don’t always enjoy writing . I can struggle to always feel connected so can’t always enjoy writing . Lucky those who can feel happy most of the time
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