Expulsion explosion

evenwheniLie

 

 

 

……..A empty heart weights heavy, feels inappropriate like a wedgie, or the Jetsons in a Chevy, it’s as obvious as someone blew those levees, a simple hello could extend last chances,  most of their lives will be remembered in glances, no matter how deep the trance is, everyone ain’t thankful for the givings, didn’t enjoy the living, too broke to enjoy the spending, too in a state of shock for befriending, situation needs mending.

 

  • Author: EvenwheniLie (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 19th, 2024 11:00
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  • 2781

    I remember growing up when people sat on porches and had gardens out the front. Always said hello, could spend time talking over a drink or cup of tea.
    Now it's double door garages, no time for pleasantries.

    • evenwheniLie

      …things have definitely changed, people seem to be more self centered, lack care or concern for others…. In my neighborhood as well as others I suspect, can be traced back to the crack epidemic.. the last remembrance I have of people having that level of moral fiber I grew up knowing was in the mid 80’s, the cradle of the crack era.

    • Doggerel Dave

      This is difficult to unpick, actually.
      • I know nothing much about specifically crack, but generally believe that the War On Drugs is a pathetic project and needs reevaluation. Unlikely as too many interests are committed to it (wot would police do without their overtime fer instance…🤣)
      • But why couple this with Incel (the picture). More pathetic shits would be hard to find. Hate women because they are not getting their share of sex? Gather together to feed and reinforce their hatred? Oh please!
      I don’t get the connection from your POV. From mine I see both as the symptoms of the economic system, which is screwing everyone down but the rich, who are multiplying like rabbits…..

      • evenwheniLie

        It's coupled with incel because they are the "expulsion" indeed, excluded from the dating scene, hateful because of it... The crack reference was in my response to the comment



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