Can I be honest?
I can't keep fixing your broken heart.
I can help you with your problems.
I can tell you that you're beautiful.
i can give you a shoulder to cry on when you need to let it all out
But I'm sorry.
i cant keep fixing your broken heart,
everyone says opposites attract
and they might be right.
cause you've been hurt your whole life
trying t save relationships that are broken inside
i'd fix our broken heart
but i'm sorry
i'm still trying to find someone to fix mines
don't know if it's your fault
don't know if its mine
don't know if maybe if you had the chance were you going to get u and leave
like i told you
i cant keep fixing your broken heart
cause at the end of the day
you were never around to help me fix mine
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My comments on the poem "Fixing broken hearts” by Harmony
From your poem :
“I cant keep fixing your broken heart
cause at the end of the day
you were never around to help me fix mine.”
We will note the following :
(a)
“Courtesy on one side only lasts so long.”
--Quoted in : Sam Phillips : "3000 proverbs." New Delhi : Goodwill Publishing House, c 2017. Full acknowledgements are made to the authors, publishers and rights-holders.
(b)
“It takes two to tango.”
(c)
The song “Where do broken hearts go ?” by Whitney Houston, 1987.
These words are impressive. Indeed, where do broken hearts go ? They can’t go anywhere. They are trapped in us. We have to keep them with us till our last day. Somehow, we have to scrape along. Best wishes to you. Do keep writing on this site. Soman Ragavan. 27 January, 2024.
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