Her smile it comes when life is strange
Aware of every subtle change
A BULLSEYE hit on every range
My ever watchful mum
A builder of the strongest walls
The fixer of my daily falls
Goes of to decorate church halls
The legend I call mum
She had her helpers this i know
Directing the entire show
I got to reap each seed she'd sow
My ever watchful mum
I never will forget the day
An April shower washed away
The needle from the stack of hay
My legendary mum
Still every now and then I see
A sign she's never leaving me
She gave me life and holds the key
My one and only mum
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Author:
peto (
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Comments8
A wonderful tribute, to a mother who was exceptional in every way. Beautiful in verse and written with the tender words of love. This stole my heart!
Aw Bella
Thank you very much
You have always been very supportive and kind
It is much appreciated
Beautiful ❤️
So kind
Thank you Teddy
Your Mum relates to the godly woman in proverbs. 31(Bible).. beautiful poem
Thank you Dayena
OMg Stevie, what a 'legendary' poem! I'm sure this tribute to your mom would make her so proud! '''She gave me life and holds the key''' is an impressive line. i hope you keep writing!!
Thank you Christina
Good to see you here
Much appreciated
Have to pay tribute to your Mum. Great write peto. 😊👍
Ah
The man who tripped over a verse
So good to see you ap
Extremely grateful for the visit and comment
Much obliged
A beautiful write!
Hi sage
Lovely to see you
Thanks very much
A beautiful tribute!
Thank you very much Angela
Truly appreciated
This is very beautiful, very impressive.
Thank you very much sunita
Extremely grateful to you for looking back over older writing
Much obliged
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