I waited for you after asking you to leave,
I urged to be fine while wishing to shine.
I cried for I broke something I could never sew,
I don’t believe I was mine.
I was sitting over the cliff on a sunset,
Pushing myself to be my best.
Learning to embrace all the heat,
For it is not, my heart beat.
I was catching up, falling down,
In the awe, when did I drown.
The cliff now blurry in the eerie of red,
Making me struggle to not to feel sad.
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Author:
Meera Mere (Pseudonym) (
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My comments on the poem "Dusk’s dilemma” by Meera Mere
While being romantic, your poem also has dramatization. Crying over a broken relationship. Sitting on a cliff at sunset : image of solitude, perhaps of sadness at the turn events took. “learning to embrace all the heat “ : trying to take the blame. “catching up, falling down” : chaos at the relationship getting out of control. “when did I drown” : hints at failing to handle the matter. “the eerie of red” : this could be the sunset or something else. “struggle to not feel sad” : the poem ends on a note of both struggle and sadness. Soman Ragavan. 4 February, 2024.
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I appreciate your thoughtful analysis of the poem, and I thank you for taking the time to engage with it on a deeper level. Your insights resonate with me, as I find myself grappling with the possibility that the end of the relationship may have been influenced by my actions, even unintentionally. I am currently navigating a sense of uncertainty, questioning whether I played a role in causing harm.
Beautiful
Thank you💫
Tremendous work.
Thank you so much.
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