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arqios

 

 

 

 

~ exPRESSions ~

  • Author: crypticbard (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 12th, 2024 00:55
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments3

  • orchidee

    Yep, you've lost me again in the crypticness of this - if that's even a word?! lol.

    • arqios

      Fido’s always got a clue. And often that’s enough to get us through!

      • orchidee

        Ah yes, he should know! lol.

      • Neville


        there is much hunger here and a thirst I can feel ..

      • sorenbarrett

        As is common with you, your words are captivating and pregnant with meaning. I loved the imagery from beginning to end. The first line vivid but also creative, the second line following up made great sense for someone scavenging then I imagined the play on words that could be associated with your desert and the word dessert. This would put a different twist to the meaning. The middle line "In picture-book perfect gales brought an abrupt stop to the top thought and like the gale indeed blew away the phisical image created in the first stanza transforming it into the last stanza, a metaphor from the physical to the emotional. A most wonderful transformation and wonderful ride on that picture-book perfect gale indeed.

        • arqios

          And a sigh of satisfaction issues upward
          As the reading both constructs and unravels
          Arriving at that junction between composing and decrypting
          Both capturing and releasing, elevating joint possession
          Carving out fresh representations of timeless truths!



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