Pointless self pity

blessednloved

Despair doesn’t even feel close enough to describing it.

 

A pit doesn’t sound deep enough 


And a mountain just isn’t quite big enough 

 

The emptiness I feel

 

leaves a hollow echoing

 

that’s a screeching ringing

 

That’s just growing

 

and bellowing

 

and destroying  

 

everything

 

I’m beyond broken tattered and shattered


Not even reaching for abused and battered

 

Barely an existence of being


I’ll be gone soon enough 


so what does it matter 


Just carry on with your own stuff.

  • Author: blessednloved (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 12th, 2024 19:37
  • Comment from author about the poem: Feeling is too much work sometimes.
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 3
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Comments1

  • daphne_398

    felt this in my soul

    • blessednloved

      Im glad you liked it… I know it’s pretty cliche to write poetry about depression but sometimes you just gotta …

      • daphne_398

        hey it's not cliché if it's felt by so many people

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