There's this amazing invention
It's called a heart:
When tuned correctly sets us apart.
Can discern evil
Can discern good.
If only we use it
The way we should.
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Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (
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It's not on the left side entirely, so First Aid Class told us. It's central, but turned to the left a bit. Good write 2.
Interesting how we still ascribe emotions and goodness or bad to the heart not brain. There is a lot of room here for analogy with four chambers, right, left, veins and arteries I like that you kept it simple and to the point. Very nice
I watched a show called thanks for the memories. It interviewed heart transplant patients. The science concluded that the heart sent messages to the brain. I didn't need the confirmation.
Science would say there is no evidence, it's a romantic thought that some mystics would agree with. It depends what you want to believe. But then so do all other things in this world.
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