AMIDST A SNOWSTORM OF LOVE

SAN2206

IT'S A SNOWSTORM DAY, 

EVERYONE ARE FINDING A SAFE PLACE, 

TO SAVE THEIR LIFE, 

INCLUDING ME,

 

I RUSH TOWARDS A HOTEL, 

WHEN I REACH THE HOTEL, 

I SAW A SHINING STAR, 

IT'S SO BRIGHT, 

 

I TAKE A DEEP LOOK, 

THEN I REALIZE, 

IT'S A BOY STANDING THERE, 

HE HELPING FOR A OLD MAN, 

 

I CAN'T STOP MY EYES FROM LOOKING, 

BOTH OF OUR EYES MEET, 

I AM SHOCKED, 

IT'S MY FIRST SIGHT LOVE. 

 

  • Author: SAN (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 24th, 2024 02:51
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 7
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  • Cloie

    Your poem vividly depicts a moment of serendipitous love amidst a snowstorm. The imagery is striking, and the revelation of first sight love is palpable. Very well done!

    • SAN2206

      Thank you so much❤. Take a look at my other poems also. I hope you will like it❤.

      • Cloie

        I'd love to read more of your poetry. Your talent shines through, and I'm sure your other poems are equally captivating. Keep up the fantastic work!

        • SAN2206

          Thank you so much. I appreciate it😊.

          • Cloie

            You're welcome!

            • SAN2206

              Did you like my poems???

              • Cloie

                Yess, I did. They are beautiful!

                • Lorenz

                  beautiful job chat gpt !

                  • SAN2206

                    Thanks cloie❤❤❤.

                    • SAN2206

                      What do you mean by chat gpt sir?

                      • Cloie

                        You're Welcome San!

                        • SAN2206

                          Wait for my other poems also cloie😊😊😊.

                          • Cloie

                            Sure!!!

                            • Lorenz

                              concerning cloie ! not you ! bye !

                              • SAN2206

                                I'm sorry i misunderstand it.But don't you think it's a bit rude sir?



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