IT'S A SNOWSTORM DAY,
EVERYONE ARE FINDING A SAFE PLACE,
TO SAVE THEIR LIFE,
INCLUDING ME,
I RUSH TOWARDS A HOTEL,
WHEN I REACH THE HOTEL,
I SAW A SHINING STAR,
IT'S SO BRIGHT,
I TAKE A DEEP LOOK,
THEN I REALIZE,
IT'S A BOY STANDING THERE,
HE HELPING FOR A OLD MAN,
I CAN'T STOP MY EYES FROM LOOKING,
BOTH OF OUR EYES MEET,
I AM SHOCKED,
IT'S MY FIRST SIGHT LOVE.
- Author: SAN (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: February 24th, 2024 02:51
- Category: Love
- Views: 7
Comments1
Your poem vividly depicts a moment of serendipitous love amidst a snowstorm. The imagery is striking, and the revelation of first sight love is palpable. Very well done!
Thank you so much❤. Take a look at my other poems also. I hope you will like it❤.
I'd love to read more of your poetry. Your talent shines through, and I'm sure your other poems are equally captivating. Keep up the fantastic work!
Thank you so much. I appreciate it😊.
You're welcome!
Did you like my poems???
Yess, I did. They are beautiful!
beautiful job chat gpt !
Thanks cloie❤❤❤.
What do you mean by chat gpt sir?
You're Welcome San!
Wait for my other poems also cloie😊😊😊.
Sure!!!
concerning cloie ! not you ! bye !
I'm sorry i misunderstand it.But don't you think it's a bit rude sir?
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