The feeling of abandonment
has knocked the door today
i find it hard to understand
you say my reaction was much
Do we have been through the same?
Does that mean i make up my pain?
do you need to hear my sorrow
to believe my feeling is horrible?
No greater guilt have i felt
you laughed with no regret
i never believed that was truthfull
you say i was doleful
Can you just accept the mistake?
Can you trust what i say ?
Can't you just stay near not afraid ?
cause that makes two of us,anyway...
I wonder back and forth
if that was my fault
is it possible to hide your pain
all you have been feeling the past few days?
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Author:
Neilton (
Offline) - Published: February 25th, 2024 10:23
- Category: Family
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Conflict with a loved one. Your lines express how difficult you are finding this situation. You convey your feelings well. I enjoyed reading your poem. All good wishes.
Thank you so much for your kind words and for taking the time to read my poem Cassie ! I am so glad you liked it!!
I am so glad I stumbled upon these fine words .. Oh' & welcome to MPS ..
I hope you will be happy here .. & write on .. Neville
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