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Neilton

The feeling of abandonment 

has knocked the door today 

i find it hard to understand 

you say my reaction was much

 

Do we have been through the same?

Does that mean i make up my pain?

do you need to hear my sorrow 

to believe my feeling is horrible?

 

No greater guilt have i felt 

you laughed with no regret 

i never believed that was truthfull 

you say i was doleful

 

Can you just accept the mistake?

Can you trust what i say ?

Can't you just stay near not afraid ?

cause that makes two of us,anyway...

 

I wonder back and forth

if that was my fault 

is it possible to hide your pain 

all you have been feeling the past few days?

  • Author: Neilton (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 25th, 2024 10:23
  • Category: Family
  • Views: 26
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  • Meera Mere

    Incredible💫 Keep writing. Your poem was truly amazing.

    • Neilton

      Thank you so so much!!! That means a lot!!

    • Lil

      This blew my mind. It's really really really really really really really really amazing.

      • Neilton

        Wow!!!! Thank you so much!! You are such an inspiration!

        • Lil

          Thank you. No ones ever said that to me.

          • Neilton

            of course!!I have read some of your poems and they are amazing!!

            • Lil

              Thank you. Wow I´m speechless.

            • Cassie58

              Conflict with a loved one. Your lines express how difficult you are finding this situation. You convey your feelings well. I enjoyed reading your poem. All good wishes.

              • Neilton

                Thank you so much for your kind words and for taking the time to read my poem Cassie ! I am so glad you liked it!!

              • Neville


                I am so glad I stumbled upon these fine words .. Oh' & welcome to MPS ..
                I hope you will be happy here .. & write on .. Neville

                • Neilton

                  Thank you so so so much!! I have just registered and it is truly amazing here! Thanks again!!

                • Poetic Dan

                  Wow... thank you for sharing your pain abandonment is not an easy table to sit at! I've been there time and time again and your beautiful words show me how far I've come! Thank you for sharing

                  • Neilton

                    Truly ! Feeling abandoned especially from family members can be really tough.Im glad you enjoyed my poem! Thank you for taking the time to read it!



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