If the another life is exist
Would you have chosen a different path?
Would you ever insist
on what now you hath?
I don't think that this way you could be someone else
If the another version of you was as conscious as I guess
If the another life is true
Could you achieve your goals?
Or something that you will do
Is just playing other roles?
Some people will say:
"This wish is so tempting.."
But won't your ideals be betrayed
With the chance to feel updating?
So, what's the point of this utopia?
Just be yourself
If the another life is exist
You'll also put these thoughts on the shelf
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Author:
foreigner (
Offline) - Published: February 26th, 2024 03:35
- Comment from author about the poem: This is one of my first poems. Also, English is my second language so I hope you won't be too harsh on my work🥲
- Category: Reflection
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Comments2
Not going to be harsh at all....just don't tell me what to do. Don't give advice. If you want to talk about personal things talk or poem them about yourself and let me be the judge.
Nothing there on your home page to indicate how qualified you are to advise me,
This verse is more addressed to myself than to other people, there was no purpose in it to give advice to someone😌
thanks for your comment!:) I'll take it into account
That's a great poem !! Well done!!
thank you!☺
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