Is the universe infinite?

foreigner

If the another life is exist

Would you have chosen a different path?

Would you ever insist 

on what now you hath? 

 

I don't think that this way you could be someone else

If the another version of you was as conscious as I guess 

 

If the another life is true 

Could you achieve your goals?

Or something that you will do

Is just playing other roles? 

 

Some people will say:

"This wish is so tempting.." 

But won't your ideals be betrayed 

With the chance to feel updating? 

 

So, what's the point of this utopia?

Just be yourself

If the another life is exist

You'll also put these thoughts on the shelf

  • Author: foreigner (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 26th, 2024 03:35
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is one of my first poems. Also, English is my second language so I hope you won't be too harsh on my work🥲
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 14
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  • Doggerel Dave

    Not going to be harsh at all....just don't tell me what to do. Don't give advice. If you want to talk about personal things talk or poem them about yourself and let me be the judge.
    Nothing there on your home page to indicate how qualified you are to advise me,

    • foreigner

      This verse is more addressed to myself than to other people, there was no purpose in it to give advice to someone😌

      • foreigner

        thanks for your comment!:) I'll take it into account

      • Neilton

        That's a great poem !! Well done!!

        • foreigner

          thank you!☺



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