Keep trying

Neilton

What's truly in your heart 

is what really matters

i try to repeat back those words 

that faded on the way to sucess

 

Never understood why i went through

all the pain,all the grief, just a life

i don't think i will ever miss, unless

i choose another way , unless i say '' i'll stay''

 

Going back to those dark places 

holds me back from a further race 

but i can't fight , i can't win

if you never try you'll never see  

  • Author: Neilton (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 26th, 2024 08:13
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Cassie58

    Keep trying. Persevere. Never give up working your way through the darkness. There is light at the end of the tunnel. I enjoyed my visit today. Thank you.

    • Neilton

      You absolutely right!! Thank you Cassie

    • Neville



      Never give up .. they will tire long before you do providing you remain determined .. very much enjoyed .. Neville

    • Neilton

      You are absolutely right Neville! Thank so so much!!!!

    • Thomas W Case

      Right on point. Excellent.

      • Neilton

        Thank you so much! I appreciate it๐Ÿ’–



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