Verses & Thorns

Royce Earnest Rasmussen

In the realm of verses, where words take flight,
A poet weaves dreams with all their might.
But in this poetic garden so green,
There lurk some creatures not so serene.

Rude comments sprout like prickly thorns,
From poets scorned, with hearts like horns.
They strut about, so bold and snide,
Leaving poets with wounded pride.

"What drivel! What a mess!
Your words are like a keyboard's distress."
They scoff and sneer, with venomous glee,
As if poetry's a joke, just for them to see.

But fear not, dear poets, stand your ground,
For in your verses, strength is found.
To the rude ones, let your words reply,
With wit and humor, don't be shy.

"Ah, my verses may not suit your taste,
But I'll keep weaving with joy and haste.
For poetry's beauty is in the eye,
Of those who appreciate, not those who pry."

So let the rude ones chirp and jeer,
Their comments like a fleeting sneer.
For in this poetic realm so vast,
Kindness and humor will forever last.

  • Author: Royce Earnest Rasmussen (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 1st, 2024 10:15
  • Comment from author about the poem: This poem reflects my experiences and observations within the world of poetry. It explores the contrast between creativity\\\'s beauty and the sting of criticism. Through vivid imagery, I aim to inspire resilience and remind fellow poets of the importance of humor and kindness. I hope readers find comfort and motivation in these verses, knowing they\\\'re not alone in facing creative challenges. This is my worst (1.65) rated poem on All Poetry but I don't think it's that bad.
  • Category: Humor
  • Views: 6
  • User favorite of this poem: Teddy.15.
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  • Teddy.15

    The poetry world is full of ego's this poem is timeless and humorous and true for those who own the green eye monster when it comes to another's scribblings. You paint your pictures with perfection 🌹



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