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peto

A well rehearsed and practiced grin 

Belies a head on turbo spin

The flames extinguished from within 

Internal tears don't show 

 

She took him to her special place 

Where being yourself is no disgrace 

Taking her time she set the pace 

For love to gently grow 

 

The sun seemed brighter every day 

The heart she freely gave away 

Beat faster when his hand would stray 

Her waistline and below

 

Two halves emerging as one whole 

What she donated still he stole 

Her life her dreams her hopes her soul

And all she'll ever know 

 

Although no blood was ever spilt 

He pushed her boundaries to the hilt 

She suffers from survivors guilt 

For wishing he would go

  • Author: peto (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 2nd, 2024 07:53
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Meera Mere

    That's the worst feeling ever. When you give it all but for a wrong person. Beautifully expressed Peto.

    • peto

      Thank you meera
      Truly appreciate your time to read
      Much obliged

    • 2781

      You would make a great song writer.

      • peto

        That is a lovely thing to say
        Thank you very much
        Truly appreciated

      • Christina8

        Very sad poem, a beautiful write! That has to be so bad, to have to feel those feelings. Wonderful rhymes!!! Christina

        • peto

          Glad you enjoyed Christina
          My appreciation for you grows daily
          Many thanks

        • Cassie58

          Beautiful expression in this poignant write Peto. I heard song lyrics too. Final stanza sums up the whole sad story of broken romance.

          • peto

            Thank you very much cassie
            Lovely to see you
            Extremely grateful for your time

          • rhmn_7

            Internal tears we don't show and don't easily extinguish, nice words!

            • peto

              Cheers rhmn7
              Truly appreciate the visit
              Much obliged

            • Accidental Poet

              Emotionally strained, poetically rained. Very well penned Peto. 😊👍

              • peto

                Thank you AP
                Appreciate your support very much



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