Let me be unhinged
As you did
And then go on..
...Care, as you did
And we won't know
How to tell apart
Love and War.
...Honesty calls for
A Peace treaty though...
The Bitter truths
And Sweet joys
Don't cancel out, by the way
Rico, you won
I avenged you
...And me, in a way...
....With this Ricochet.
-Al
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Author:
Alan R (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This little piece, is very close to my heart. Rico, hope you know what I felt.
- Category: Love
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Comments2
"The contrast between 'Love and War' and the plea for a 'Peace treaty' adds depth to the exploration of human connections. The acknowledgment of 'Bitter truths' and 'Sweet joys' coexisting is a poignant observation, and the reference to 'Ricochet' beautifully captures the ricocheting effects of emotions and actions. Overall, a thought-provoking and beautifully expressed piece."
I am very grateful for such a wonderful reflection thanks a lot....
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