Yes I know you're a dreamer
See it in your eyes
Always looking straight through
All the stars in the sky
And what's waiting up there
Is unknown to me
But the way that it grips you
Is too plain to see
With those wild staring eyes
You pierce right through my soul
Like a comet coming down
And burning like coal
And the world keeps turning
As it tends to do
But you don't seem to notice
I guess that's just you
With those wild staring eyes
Shining bright like diamonds
You leave me such a wreckage
And broken up like islands
In the sea I am surrendered
It's all I can do
But you don't seem to notice
I guess that's just you
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Author:
noah (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 5th, 2024 04:36
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Comments6
Good write G.
ty orchidee
I always return with a review, I see this as truly beautiful, I'm reading it with ladies eyes 🌹
thank you teddy, much appreciated !!
Very captivating
ty alan
Smooth poetry.
The inaccessibility of the other penned with a degree of resignation.
I understood it (I think) perfectly.
you're free to interpret how you like! thank you!!
Flow rhyme and rhythm are all spot on
Great read Gon
ty peto, much appreciated
I'm a bit of a snob when it to reading others poetry. But here I am and there you are, enjoyed your words. The use of the Universal language was a good choice.
thank you so much for reading! lovely compliment
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