And suddenly i walked in
who am i ? who are you?
do you see me ? is it clear?
not for you, i see my dear
I would stay up all night
just to hear what's on your mind
but you end the conversation
like it was another occasion
Talk to me
laugh with me
let's find a way in
but then agan it's only me
It's your fault anyway
but i must sincerely say,
it is just another crime
to leave everything behind
You left without saying goodbye
i don't believe that was right
You said everything is fine
i don't believe it this time
It's not my fault
you breath and cough
it's not my fault
i don't love you anymore
Like a poison
through my veins
you made me weep
every other day
Do i miss you?
More than ever ...
but not my fault
i now surely know
So even though i miss
the good old days
in the pouring rain
they are only to gaze.
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Nice rhyme in this poem
Although sad it also has a feeling of moving on
That takes strength
Enjoyed
Indeed ! I am glad you liked it
I sense more than just a hint of sadness here .. enjoyed tho' ..
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There should be no room in any of our lives for toxic love. Beautiful. 🌹
You are absolutely right!! Thank you so much for your comment!
A fine poem expressing swell, lamenting and sighing superbly in words. Kudos!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
woww !!thank you so much for your kind words!!
ofc ill check your poem!
A sad poem. Must have been alot of hurt here and that takes time to soften. I only hope there are good memories too.
Thank you so much Cassie for your kind words !It surely takes time to heal but i will get there one day !!
Awww, what a poignant 😢
and emotional poem
very touching indeed!
Eloquently penned and
my pleasure to read!!
Best wishes. 🌹
Thad
Thank you so so much for your kind words Thad!!
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