I've been through a few seasons,
All came to an end.
From the gutter to the gatepost,
You always were my friend.
At times I abandoned you,
Went on my merry way.
But you never left me,
I just went astray.
In good time you called me,
With a forceful nudge...
Reminding me to have no doubt,
All actions shall be judged.
Now, with your love, you guided me,
Up to this very day.
Is this season ending?
It's been fun,
I have to say.
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Author:
Valiantstar (Pseudonym) (
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Comments6
I really hope it's not ending
I enjoy your rhyme nowadays
It adds so much
Enjoyed the read especially liked the end verse
Thank you, I am what I am, and that takes many forms.
Proves to me, he can use us, but only on his terms.
I never could write, humbled at the thought, that only he could put into words, the things that I am taught.
His love is pure, his shining like the day, I thank him for all he is, and hope we find the way.
"From the gutter to the gatepost", A lovely phrase, it describes our lives so succinctly.
Good write 2.
From the gutter to the gatepost
You always were my friend
Such an incredibly strong couplet. Says it all.
"From the gutter to the gatepost,
You always were my friend.
At times I abandoned you,
Went on my merry way. "
Beautiful poem 2781, thoroughly enjoyed the flow and your choice of words is incredible.
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