If we were all truly living
Happiness would shine
The truth would be told
No more living a lie
No more spoiled bastards
leaving the less fortunate to rot in hell
No child would suffer
We would all help each other to excel
Men and women
All races would be equal
History would no longer repeat itself
We would no longer be stuck in this sequel
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- Author: Amanda Klessig (Sunshine) (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: March 10th, 2024 15:20
- Category: Sad
- Views: 8
Comments3
If only sunshine
You are describing what would be paradise
Really enjoyed the final verse
With a banging rhyme
Super write
Paradise or heaven. Always believe in your dreams. Thank you for the positive feedback 🙂
There may be a sequel with great and terrifying consequences.
Gotta have bad to appreciate the good
Tremendous.
Thank you!
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