Hey everyone. I'm taking this time to thank everyone that has read my poems, everyone that left comments, taken the time to start a conversation, and Thank you Mason for handing me my first loss in a few years. Like I said you came hard and I respect that.
I'm taking some time to step back and focus on my ever expanding health issues as well as getting into a strong mindset for my upcoming 7th spinal fusion operation. I appreciate you all. This is not goodbye like The Terminator I'll be back... And much like Terminator my spine will be metal.
By Chad Carlson and an anonymous friend.
I have been messing around with some friends texting freestyle rap battles against each other to pass the time. Here's an example. I'll leave out my friend's name though. He said that I could share his verse.
This is his verse
I splatter words on canvases look in between the lines not to close you will receive nerve damage to many letters in front of your eyes then again you'll manage
This is mine...
Yes I can manage the damage with the mind of a savage. Words razor sharp causing havoc better get you a bandage. I'm on a wicked mission and I scare all your children. When you step in my vision you must not have an interest in living. Getting in my face is risky mind sick like a disease I'm quick to get pissy and hit you with a 3 piece... With a pop pop pop man that's onomatopoeia! Going up against me man I don't wanna be ya. Looking at your homies I see they don't want none either. So I'll chew you up and spit you out and leave you in the ether.
I feel like I came out ahead. But sometimes I'm better when I don't think about what's going to come out.
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Author:
Chad Carlson (
Offline) - Published: April 5th, 2024 14:28
- Comment from author about the poem: Freestyle rap battles are another way for me to express myself. I'm almost better when everything has to be made up in the moment. I surprise myself most days.
- Category: Special occasion
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Comments2
Cool. Yeah, poetry basically is rapping.😅
Hey Mason thanks for reading. I have other battles to post as well.
Great work.
Thank you Thomas. I appreciate it.
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