The beauty of the mind

Lei


Notice of absence from Lei
If I don't answer I'm most likely at school,with family (just got back from surgery so still kinda recovering)

If you ever wish to dive into the depths of my mind

endless wonders you may find

never ending mysteries of the great divine 

never running out of time 

  • Author: Lei (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 6th, 2024 07:11
  • Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this poem and most of my other poems on a google doc beforehand ( I don't know if this affects anything or not)
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 9
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  • 2781

    AI can try, but where does conscientious lie?

    • Lei

      this isn't Ai

      • 2781

        I know.

        • Lei

          you where just saying that to mess with me? anyways do you have any tips for me to make my poems more humanly? And thank you for the compliment

          • 2781

            No tips here, your doing just fine.

            • Lei

              ok thank you

            • Lei

              do you have any tips on how I can make my poems more humanly?
              and also I chose to post that one because the rest of my poems are about depression self harm suicide etc so I thought that would be the safest option, but thank you for your compliment I appreciate it even though you didn't mean it in a good way Lol

              • Lil

                In my opinion I say write how you feel or felt. Life experience, annoyance if you have suicidal ones write them. Just express urself.

                • Lei

                  ok thank you so much!

                  • Lil

                    No problem. I hope you make the greatest poems no matter how harsh they are.

                    • Lei

                      thank you for the inspiration! I will try my hardest

                      • Lil

                        Your welcome!



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