Oh I hope I wont be the last
how come my world has to end so fast?
I've did the best I could in a good way
It's almost as if I was never meant to stay.
Abusive parents, no end in sight
with my father dead i'd think I would see the light,
going through it all for 12 long years
I'm afraid the end of my world nears.
Lovely friends I hope
soon to be forgotten soon to past..
They move on way too fast
..
If you're still reading this u need some help
I can see all the pain and suffering you were dealt.
Through all the suffering and pain
from the anxiety and stress I gain
if you're gonna need me when your hurt
tell me now before I shove u in the fucking dirt.. 💔
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Author:
ȷąʂ°ŋ (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 21st, 2024 12:13
- Category: Sad
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Comments3
solid 9/10, great structure and meaning, i loved it, but there are... a couple *cough* *cough* grammatical errors
its a 9.9999999/10 wdym? 😭
lmaooo😂 my bad
I give it an 11. It’s deep bruh😭😭😭 I like your writing style too💖 keep going
thx "Ms. I friended u cuz I like ur name lol" 😂
Ur welcome 😂
Man that's deep, I liked the part when you called us out Lol ( how you know i need help) Lol anyways great write!
thx 👍
of course!
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