Just to Hear your Laughter

Teddy.15

 

And as the day grows old

so does the laughter

laughter that's fading

into the pink dusky sky 

making its journey home   

 

echoing through the clouds 

sneaking over the dozing rainbows

 

until at last the great moon arrives

and the final theatre of the day

takes to the great stage bright

 

another day has come and gone 

and as I lay my head to rest

on my soft pillow

I'm forever grateful 

of awakening into another new dawn

 

lost in a moment, time stands still

a gracious silence

before the great encore

of sunrise

 

just to hear your laughter.

  • Author: Teddy.15 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 23rd, 2024 02:38
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 21
  • Users favorite of this poem: Saxon Crow
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  • Saxon Crow

    That's really lovely Teddy. Faved for sure.

    How are you?

    • Teddy.15

      Hello gorgeous sax, I am always honoured to know when you love my stuff, so I seem to have got myself some chronic shingles, but it could always be worse, couldn't it, thank you for coming by my old mate. 🌹

    • Jerry Reynolds

      A fine poem Teddy.
      Shingles—Ouch feel better soon.

      • Teddy.15

        Ah, ouch yes, but I'm still going dear Jerry. Lovely to see you dear poet. 🌹

      • Cassie58

        Dear Teddy, such eloquent words in this write. Your posted image is lovely. I felt the winding down at the day’s end. A calmness in your diction and the promise of a new sunrise. Happy Tuesday dear poet. 🏴󠁧󠁢󠁥󠁮󠁧󠁿🏴󠁧󠁢󠁥󠁮󠁧󠁿🏴󠁧󠁢󠁥󠁮󠁧󠁿🌹

        Laughter is the best medicine

        • Teddy.15

          Laughter is the best medicine I've had shingles for 14 months unfortunately, however there are worse off people than me, and all my lovely friends of the poetry world such as you dear Cassie always bring a smile. Thank you dear poetess. 🌹

        • aDarkerMind

          one to savour and enjoy Teddy.

          and worthy of much applause.

          • Teddy.15

            Thank you my dear Melvin. 🌹

          • Thomas W Case

            So beautiful.

            • Teddy.15

              Thank you dear Thomas. 🌹

            • Doggerel Dave

              A gem about which I have no comment because it just is - a gem.

              • Teddy.15

                Thank you dear Dave 🌹 I'm speechless ❤️

              • sorenbarrett

                The imagery in this poem is so enthralling and bright that it lifts and carries one on. The use of periods of the day is a wonderful and creative use of time in this display. A great message as well. Very nice.

                • Teddy.15

                  Thank you so much dear sorrenbarret 🌹 just to hear your laughter. 🤗



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