And as the day grows old
so does the laughter
laughter that's fading
into the pink dusky sky
making its journey home
echoing through the clouds
sneaking over the dozing rainbows
until at last the great moon arrives
and the final theatre of the day
takes to the great stage bright
another day has come and gone
and as I lay my head to rest
on my soft pillow
I'm forever grateful
of awakening into another new dawn
lost in a moment, time stands still
a gracious silence
before the great encore
of sunrise
just to hear your laughter.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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That's really lovely Teddy. Faved for sure.
How are you?
Hello gorgeous sax, I am always honoured to know when you love my stuff, so I seem to have got myself some chronic shingles, but it could always be worse, couldn't it, thank you for coming by my old mate. ๐น
A fine poem Teddy.
ShinglesโOuch feel better soon.
Ah, ouch yes, but I'm still going dear Jerry. Lovely to see you dear poet. ๐น
Dear Teddy, such eloquent words in this write. Your posted image is lovely. I felt the winding down at the dayโs end. A calmness in your diction and the promise of a new sunrise. Happy Tuesday dear poet. ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐ด๓ ง๓ ข๓ ฅ๓ ฎ๓ ง๓ ฟ๐น
Laughter is the best medicine
Laughter is the best medicine I've had shingles for 14 months unfortunately, however there are worse off people than me, and all my lovely friends of the poetry world such as you dear Cassie always bring a smile. Thank you dear poetess. ๐น
For when we're inspired, we write. When we laugh, we live. Beautiful Teddy. ๐น๐๐
Thank you dear A.P laughing all the way. ๐น
one to savour and enjoy Teddy.
and worthy of much applause.
Thank you my dear Melvin. ๐น
So beautiful.
Thank you dear Thomas. ๐น
A gem about which I have no comment because it just is - a gem.
Thank you dear Dave ๐น I'm speechless โค๏ธ
The imagery in this poem is so enthralling and bright that it lifts and carries one on. The use of periods of the day is a wonderful and creative use of time in this display. A great message as well. Very nice.
Thank you so much dear sorrenbarret ๐น just to hear your laughter. ๐ค
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