A Color Poem

Lil


Notice of absence from Lil
If I don't respond in a few minutes I am probably at School, sleeping, with family/ friends, or forgot to bring my device. Or grounded.

Black
It has always been my favorite color
For how perfectly it would look 'classy'
How beautifully it would be hiding all the brightness in its core
Yet nobody would ever get a glimpse
But when it starts becoming the color of life
It makes the people run away
For how would someone ever handle the color which would hold so much emotion
The haters of dark and grey
Will you explain what color space is?
The carrier of all the sunshine
How beautifully black brightens the one in foreground
But when someone experiences black
It somehow becomes a reason for isolation and 'taboo'
But let me tell you this
All the bearers of white and bright
Moon intensifies its beauty at night
Yet in day it stands as a spot in the sky in-spite
Let me tell you
I am living in black
But somehow I have known the beauty of all the colors
The green of the leaf
The waves of the cloud
The whiteness of wind
The purple of desolation
The yellow of bright sunny day
The pink of love
The brown of fall
And the rainbow of spring
And yet when I am going through a 'black'hole
The shine of light is immense here
It makes you close your eyes
And ironically you see black again! !

With this color comes these emotions

Power, elegance, sophistication, status, formality

. Evil, death, grief, mourning, the occult.

 Mystery, bleakness, heaviness, depression, rebellion, fear

This color represents me 

In color psychology, black means power and control, hanging on to information and things rather than giving out to others.
Holding on to something makes me full
 Black is intimidating, unfriendly and unapproachable because of the power it exudes. It can prevent two-way communication because of its intimidation.
I may seem friendly, but I am deadly on so many levels
Writing is what helps me contain my anger all the stuff
Stuff that could hurt others
I am also strong-willed and determined character
, I am someone who is not afraid to go after what they want and usually seeks power and prestige. 
I can be demanding at times, perhaps, but black as a color choice is a timeless decision IN which is why I chose this color
 
 
 
*What inspired me to do this color out of all*
This color may be a little dark, but to me it is bright
Wonderful and it really describes me.A mystery. I may seem easy to understand
through my poems, but thats just the beginning to what I really am.
This color helped me through my life yeah people maybe scared of me or
may wanna never talk to me because  ¨I look like imma kill them¨ But to me I say *wheres the fun in that*
Thats why some people amuse me and some piss me off. Oh and also when it comes to this color. You may not see it as one, but I do
I see it everywhere I go. (not to freak anyone out) I believe in after life. I myself can communicate with these things so to me black helps me see
The side of things I never saw before.
  • Author: Lil-M-M (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 24th, 2024 16:47
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  • David Wakeling

    I read this twice but I'm a little confused.Black is not a colour.It is the absence of all colour.It's the colour we wear to a funeral.But each to their own.Maybe try Chartreuse.Now that's a nice greeny yellow colour.Much happier

    • Lil

      I chose this color for a reason. To me it is a color it brightens out the beautiful stars and moon and it is always there. At a funeral to me it resembles the life that person has had and the amazement. Oh I am so so so sorry I know how this sound I just want people to see my perspective on how black shows power and the beauty it brings out. So sorry again!. Btw I cant see green I am color blind... Thanks anyways.

    • RiverJordan

      Well thought out, cool write!

      • Lil

        Tysm.

      • Orions pen

        Great poem, I love how you expressed black as making those in the foreground seem brighter, and how when you close your eyes to get some peace, black is also the colour that you see.

        • Lil

          Yes I love the colour, but even if others dont see it idc bc I am me and they are themselves. But anyways ty for ur comment!!

        • ⃟⃟Κεν⛣ςΞ̊ᶻ 𝗓 𐰁

          color or colour-

          • Lil

            Well if I am using it the correct term is the English in which is color. Colour is the U.K term.

            • ⃟⃟Κεν⛣ςΞ̊ᶻ 𝗓 𐰁

              ohhhhh makes sense ty 😀

              • Lil

                Np

              • Mase ♪

                Right? Like what's the fun in killing someone? 😂 Nice write Lily.

                • Lil

                  Lol oh my gosssshhhhh. Right!! Pple r always asking me that bc I scare em.... Tysm

                • orchidee

                  My favourite colour was black until I fell down the stairs one night (in the pitch black) forgetting to put the light on! Doh! heehee.
                  Am I telling porkies?

                  • Lil

                    Lol anyways... Kinda!



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