Misplaced outrage and learning no life lessons,
Absent thoughts about entering the high heavens,
Random outbursts and microaggressions,
Wanting to get pissed on all the drinking sessions,
Do what tho wilt mentality without any confessions,
Turn your life around and seek out some blessings.
- Author: Shaunmatthewcpoetry ( Offline)
- Published: April 28th, 2024 02:31
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 6
Comments2
Good write SB.
First line - I learnt a lesson in geography. Is that related to life lessons, or am I talking rubbish?! lol.
I'm confused where do I mention geography? Lol.
I just thought of geography randomly, as something I've had a lesson in. lol. I could have put instead: 'a lesson in maths, chemistry, history, ....'whatever!
You make a lot of change in so few lines - if you can, do it; I think you are on the right path.
Cheers!
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