She was rejected multiple times,
'Cause of her appearance.
They judged her simplicity,
And innocence.
She was left out,
Since unfit for their criterion.
A society that always
Overlooks a rare obsidian.
She's an Osmanthus fragrans¹
In a farm of tulips,
Or a vintage boat
Among modern and elegant ships.
1. A flower that doesn't hold a gorgeous appearance but is known for its pleasant and outstanding scent.
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Author:
Samar (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is very close to my heart. It\\\'s for those people, especially girls, who are not necessarily pretty by appearance but have an extraordinarily beautiful heart, an empathetic soul, and a mind full of intellect.
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Comments2
this is without doubt beautiful and on so many different counts ..
perfect ink spilt extraordinarily .. Oh' and welcome to MPS .. write on .. Neville
That means the world to me.😊
A follow on Instagram would be really appreciated. I need your support to grow on my literary journey.😌
Conventional beauty or attractiveness – nonsense which identifies the superficiality of conventional values and norms.
Mind you, I did have to utilise the magnifying power of my PC (ctrl +) to read your piece; my eyesight is not good, so perhaps….
I fail to understand what the utilization of the useless 18+stamp has achieved and why.
However, all carping and cheap jokes aside, the message is clear and true. I hope to see more of your work here.
I got confused and somewhat shocked at first.😁
Thanks a million for your appreciation. I need your support. Maybe you could follow me on Instagram @shauq_e_safar. You could read my quotes and poems there too.
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