When you say you love the moon,
Do you also mean the darkness it comes with?
When you say you love the rain,
Do you mean the muddy aftermath too?
When you say you love the roses,
Do you also mean the thorns it comes with?
When you say you love her,
Do you mean the scars on her body and mind too?
When you say you love yourself,
Do you mean the insecurities on your mind too?
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Author:
Meera Mere (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Love is accepting the darkness moon brings along; the mud rain leaves with; the thorns roses grow with. Accepting the scars that she hides from the world. Love is in the acceptance.. What are your thoughts on the poem?
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I have one: it's from a saying: 'You can't have your cake AND eat it too'.
My line is: When you say 'I want cake' do you know you cannot have it and eat it too?!' heehee.
😂😂I don't want to have it, I want to eat it.
You gobbled it all up?! lol. And can I have any? lol.
Beautiful. Very well done.
Thanks T.
Hello Meera. Your poem is beautiful and it makes me think most things have a downside. Best to focus on the good points. Have a happy Tuesday.
Yeah everything comes at a cost. Thank you so much for reading and commenting😊❤️
"Meera, this poem is so thought-provoking! It makes me realize how important it is to accept and love things in their entirety, flaws and all. Your words have a way of making me reflect on my own perspectives and biases. Thank you for sharing this!"
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