I'm an accident waiting to happen
A riot about to explode
A song that stops every foot tappin'
The fork at the end of your road
The knife in your heart that's been twisted
The goals just outside of your reach
That person you've always insisted
Has nothing but hatred to preach
I'm the ultimate fly in your ointment
That itch you can never quite scratch
The bringer of pure disappointment
The break you can never quite catch
So next time you see your reflection
Look past the exterior view
Get rid of this whole damn collection
As all of it's stemming from you
- Author: peto ( Offline)
- Published: June 7th, 2024 00:14
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 28
- Users favorite of this poem: Introverted Sage, Christina8
Comments7
Ain't that so!
Truly appreciate the visit and comment mutley
Many thanks
If we were to judge ourselves we wouldn't be judged.
Wise words indeed
Thank you very much
So true! The hardest thing seems to be letting it all go.
Deep self reflection is so needed.
Brilliant write
Too kind sage
But very much appreciated
Many thanks
OMG I love the rhyme scheme of this poem and it's oh so true, especially at the end. I really like this one!! Just love the rhymes, like I said. Perfection!
You humble me Christina
Extremely grateful as always
I truly appreciate you and your time
Many thanks
This is extremely beautiful!
I think the reason we judge others is because we are afraid of being judged ourselves
You could very well be right there o
I truly appreciate the read and comment
Many thanks
Such well penned stanzas peto. This poem reads so well aloud and the flow is first rate. Well done.
Many thanks cassie
Really appreciate such positive encouragement
Extremely grateful as always
The kind of poetry I like - Excellent, peto.
I refuse to comment further on the grounds that it may incriminate me.......
Lol
The kind of comment I like
Thank you Dave
Really appreciate the support
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