Desire
Like a flame
From the depths of the heart
Does rise
Like lava
It flows
And scorches
All that in its path lies
But finding no response
It withers and it dies
And tears flow unchecked
As denied of the prize
- Author: safina (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: June 9th, 2024 00:16
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 16
Comments3
Such a descriptive image of desire it is well displayed in this poem. Nicely done
thanks for the feedback. have a great day, and more power to your pen too
Amazing and captivating write
glad you like it. thank you for the compliment, have a good day
You're welcome
So very nicely conveyed. Beautiful poetry NafisaSB. All good wishes.
Thanks dear both for your comments and the wishes. Sending back the good wishes doubled..
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