I love you?

Sunita

I love the rain,

Not in a way of I LOVE THE RAIN,

But more in a "you've got no idea" love the rain.

It's just so free,

Like I wanted to be ....... then.

I love the rain,

It reminds me of you,

Purity like your heart, found right out of the blue.

Or red or white or maybe transparent, 

Has a way of getting through people's soul, eyes that can make hearts melt.

I love the rain, It's just like your hands,

When the wind blows by me, feels like your hand on mine just lands.

I love the cold, as it brushes against my skin,

It reminds me of your lips, how they were so thin.

I love the thunder, the loudest roar I've ever heard,

Reminds me how I screamed for your love when it was over my head.

I love the lightning, it's just like your smile,

It can lighten the mood in a typical gold mine.

I love everything about the rain,

As everything about it is about you,

Gosh, did I just say,

In a different way,

I LOVE YOU?

  • Author: Joanna (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 9th, 2024 07:55
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is how I feel every time it rains.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 30
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Comments5

  • Tony36

    Awesome write

    • Sunita

      Thank you!

      • Tony36

        You're welcome

      • peto

        Welcome sunita
        Great debut
        Looking forward to reading more from you

        • Sunita

          I surely will work on more heart whelming poems.

        • Teddy.15

          Ah to feel this type love as a young person I remember well. Beautifully written. 🌹

        • Thad Wilk

          Awww,
          a lovely and
          delightful write!! ✍️
          Beautifully scripted
          and to read a delight!! 😉
          Best wishes 🌹 Thad

          • Sunita

            Thankyou Thad, really appreciate it.

            • Thad Wilk

              My pleasure poetess!

            • kyr0

              Beautiful ❤️

              • Sunita

                Thanks!



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