Drops of confetti
fall to the ground
along with the tears
of the girl in the crowd.
A place you feel safe.
A place you declare.
You shout and address
your pain.
Where is it?
When the man on the screen
make shows of true relief.
Displays values of her dreams.
He sings and she feels seen.
Who is he ?
The alleviation of the pain
revealed the savior of her fate.
COLDPLAY!
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Author:
Neilton (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I went to Coldplay yesterday ! A dream come true! I have been listening to them since I was a kid ! You can imagine my excitement ! A silly poem but from the bottom of my heart ! The love Chris Martin gives , the messages he conveys in his concert make him unique 💖
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Pleased you enjoyed the concert. No question of doubt you found the experience uplifting. A totally positive and memorable occasion your tribute tells me:)
Exactly! I think it was the best day ever! Thank you so much Cassie for stopping to read my poem ! 💖
You are very welcome:)
Excellent
Thank you !
You're welcome
I have had the same pleasure neilton
Saw them in Glasgow
This has a great rhyme to begin with
Out of all their songs this really reminds me of "fix you "
Great write
Wow.Thank you so so much for your kind words. It means a lot !!! I\'m glad you had the opportunity to see them !!
I am quite sure that I was sitting at a bar in a beautiful quiet square in the hills of a Florence a few years ago and Chris Martin rode up to my table on a bike, it was the weirdest moment but I can say I am almost certain it was him. To have a crush or passion for a pop star is a real life emotion, I felt the same for so many artists in the 90's beautiful poetry we need more inspiring voices in the music industry 🌹
Wow!! What a moment truly!!! Thank you for taking the time to say that , I appreciate it very much💖💖. you are absolutely right the love I have for this band and the impact they have on my thinking is immense !!
Very cool. The love comes through in your writing. Great work.
That's very kind of you to say ! Thank you so much!!!
How lovely is that .. very I imagine .. & then some ..
Thank you Neville!
a wow in a life moment for sure .. nice one N .. N 🙂
Exactly! Thank you !!
An uplifting and
Insightful write!! ✍️
So glad your
dream came true,
to read A delight!! 👍
Best wishes 🌹. Thad
Wow thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem! It was truly a unique experience
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