Chinese Evergreen
Amidst a garden of flowers stands an Asian boy with eyes consumed by the evil of the Sun.
Although his demeanor incandescent within him resides a green-eyed monster. Cacophonies of cheers and cries tease the boy’s ears and remind him of the boundless behemoth of blindness that follows him. A curse that has kept him caged in the cold fathomless cosmos.
He stares into the open with his luminous gold face soaked by sadness and wonders why he got denied the opportunity to traverse the unending vastitude like the blooming flowers before him.
By Humangasaurus
- Author: Humangasaurus ( Offline)
- Published: June 9th, 2024 11:54
- Category: Sad
- Views: 9
Comments1
Very good, the sentence could be a bit shorter, that'll in turn give you a more uniform flow and rhymes.
Still very well expressed!
Thank you
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